Oi, this one is largely clean! Good job.Now let's just take a look at the second sentence. It says "creates a cloud" but it doesn't say who or what is doing that action. Please insert the doer.
kuya told me to make it like that
Kuya can miss things as well. Ask him to look at that sentence with you and work together on fixing it.
Oi, this one is largely clean! Good job.
ReplyDeleteNow let's just take a look at the second sentence. It says "creates a cloud" but it doesn't say who or what is doing that action. Please insert the doer.
kuya told me to make it like that
ReplyDeleteKuya can miss things as well. Ask him to look at that sentence with you and work together on fixing it.
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